Wednesday, November 28, 2012

Realistic Fiction


 Please share your realistic fiction story idea. Where is the setting or where does you story take place? Who is the main character or characters? What problems will your character face?  What is your favorite part of the story?  Please write in complete sentences.  Proofread your sentences before you publish.




21 comments:

  1. Well my story is about a kid named nnif who's not that smart.So he takes the subway to get to the pool when it's in the backyard.My favorite part is when nnif takes the subway to get to the pool.

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  2. My ideas for my story is about a really good baseball team, their best player sprains their ankle, and they lose ten games in a row. They needed to win six games to go to the world championship, they win five and lose two. In the last inning of the eighth game, their worst player is up, the bases are loaded, there were two strikes, and two outs. Suddenly he hits a grand slam to win the game!!!!!

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  3. Well my story is about this kid named J.J. .He wants to buy a toy because he did something nice for his mom.So he gets in the car and drives to the Galleria.
    But he uses an elevator to go up 5 floors.But on the third floor he gets stuck because
    the elevator gets stuck and he can't move. So he starts to play video games. Until someone pounds on the door and he brakes out.Then he goes and gets the toy
    he wanted.So he went home and softly said "I'm never going to ride an elevator

    AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  4. My idea for my story is about an 18 year old girl named Tracy who goes to a new school. She has a problem starting there though, namely a mean girl whose name is Liz. She makes lots of new friends but unfortunately Liz is planning something. But this time it will involve Tracy's friends. You will have to read the book to find out what happens next!

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  5. My story is about a bank robbery in Paris. This is the first sentence I wrote, "All of a sudden there was a big explosion and someone ran in with a black mask, grabbed a bag of money and took off." Jake, the main character, chases after the bank robber, but gets too tired to run anymore. Jake is 12. He calls his friend Nicholas who is 14 and goes over to his house and told him about the bank robbery. He sees something black in Nick's back pocket. It was the black mask. So Jake breaks into Nicholas house when Nicholas is gone and opens a cabinet and sees the bag of money and then finds nicholas's phone. Nicholas had left a reminder message to rob a different bank. So, Jake met him there and caught him, and called the cops.

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  6. My story is about a chines girl. She moves to America and her mom wont let her go to school, because her mom thinks that Mari can't speak English. But she can, her mom wont listen though. So she sneaks of to school and- you'll just have to read the rest of the book.

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  7. My story is about two teenage boys who go to the mall and wen its time to leave they get a call that one of the caricatures Lucas's dad can not come .So his dad has to send his mom to pick them up she can't either.So she sent Marvin's baby setter.It takes her a wile to get there.So they waited and waited. a few cars came but not the right ones.After that two bad guys come and try to attack .Then a car comes up to them it is Lucas's dad they cheered YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    1. Seems sorta violent, . . .
      But really GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  8. My wonderful story is about a boy named Johnny who hates school!!! But something very suspicious happens that brings things to life! Mrs. Ferrall (the teacher) gets a very fishy phone call. It is his job to find out what the sound was. You will have to read to find out more!

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  10. The story I'm witting is about a gril named Emily that lines in
    Alabama then moves to Oklahoma. and emilys mom lose her pet pig pepeiand Emilys is so worried that she will never find pepei. My absoulotely favorite part of this book is when emily finds pepei. I hope you can find my book and read it.

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  11. My story is about two boys that go into the forest. There names are Billy and Billbo Bacons. In my story Billy and Bacons get caught on fire. A volcano shoots lava everywere and Billy and Bacons fall down a waterfall and thats pretty much all.

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  12. My story takes place in a school. There are 7 characters in my book. The teacher does not like the kids so she leaves school to go on vacation. A substitute comes to teach the students. My favorite part is when a girl named Alex bumps into a girl named Mckenna and says "UUGG YOU BROKE MY NAIL!"

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  13. My story is about a football team that is loosing. They come and win the game. The story takes place in Baltimore at Bank Satdium. The main characters are James and Connor. My favorite part is at the end when James throws a touchdown with one second left.

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  14. My story is about a girl named Emily. She finds a dog on the road named Lucy.Her parents say she can keep the dog until its family finds it. My favorite part of the story is when Emily finds the dog and keeps it. Lucy is a puppy that is a chocolate lab. Lucy is also soft and cuddly. My two main characters are Emily and Lucy. Emily and Lucy love to go on walks and play fetch. Lucy loves to be active. Hope you liked it!

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  15. My story takes place on a football field in Nashville, Tennessee. The main character is
    Jake Johnson. My character has to face losing his power to see into the future. My favorite
    part is when he flips over someone for a touchdown to win the game.

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  16. My book is about a girl named Lucy. She takes ballet class, and there is this girl named Georgia. She is very mean to Lucy. Lucy and Georgia are in the same ballet class. The ballet class had a big performance. Lucy gets all the attention, and Georgia wants it. So Georgia kicks Lucy and Lucy falls and breaks her leg. Be sure to read my book so you will know how it ends.

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  18. My book is about a girl named Nina and her 2 brothers Jackson and Sam and her sister named Cortney. Their mother signs them up for an Olympic training gym and Nina is not happy about it.
    She lives in Georgetown TX.

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  19. My story is about a poor man named Sean that gets drafted.
    Sean fought 1974-1074 and he fought well.he goes to the
    airbase in New york city where he takes his first
    mission read my story to find out more about my story

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