Wednesday, September 21, 2016

Personal Narrative




We had a great Writing Workshop session today. We added in details to our personal narrative drafts and stretched our stories!

Share with us what your Personal Narrative is about! What seed idea are you writing about? If you remember your lead, what is it? 

Please write four or more sentences and use correct punctuation. 


26 comments:

  1. My story is about CLH. My seed idea is about my first trolly. My lead is all about the trolly ride. I can't wait to finish this book.

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  3. My story is about me and my friend. We went swimming and ate lunch together. But then it started to rain. So Virginia came to my house.😜

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  4. My story is that I was playing outside with my dog. I got really hot so we came inside to cool of.Then we when back out side.

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  5. My personal narrative is about the first time I got a motorcycle. I was at the ranch and I was 5 years old. It was my birthday present from my dad. The seed of the story is the motorcycle and me.

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  6. My story is about my trip to the Seattle aquarium. We went with my cousins. We saw the new octopus. And we went on a ferris wheel.

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  7. My seed idea is about when I first got my dog. My dead idea is that my dog doesed bite.

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  8. My story is about the time I went to chicago with my dad, we went to the cubs game and the cubs hit a walk off home run against the brewers.It was really fun,and we stayed with our cousins!!

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  9. My story is about my first time going on a bike trail with my dad. I fell and got scrapes all the way up and down my legs.it was scary.

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  10. My story is about a normal day at my house with my friend.....turns out it was not so ordinary.👁

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  11. My personal narrative is about the time my brother, Brody, hit me with a golf club. My lead is: It was a cool spring day and I started to walk behind my brother, who was playing golf in the back yard, to tell him something and BOOM he hit me like a bomb! 💣 That was my lead! Now I am going to talk about what happened after he hit me. I had to go to the hospital for stitches! It was not fun. I had to stay there for three nights. It was especially not fun because I was only three years old! But my mom was there and they gave me fun stuff to color. 😭

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  12. my seed idea is my trip to Alaska😀. I went with my cousins👭. It was lots of fun!

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  13. My seed idea is when I concerned my fear of monkey bars read my book to find out what happens in the story.

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  14. My seed idea is when I was at Cate's ranch. Then, we both got hurt, and so we couldn't play.

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  15. My personal narrative is about the time me and my friend Jasmine went to the pool. It was fun, I loved it. Read my book to find out.

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  16. My story is about when my dad and I went fishing with a guide. My seed idea is about when we were fishing and I was standing there waiting. Then I caught a redfish and I was on the front of the boat and it started pulling like a freight train. It literally almost pulled me in! The guide was telling me to hold on.

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  17. My seed idea is about when I got my two pet squirrels. My dad caught the squirrels when he was taking our dog Xuma for a walk. He was thinking of giving them away but my mom and I wanted to keep them.
    That is what my seed idea is about.

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  18. My seed idea was when I went on a cabin trip at Lost Maples State Park. I went there with my parents, sister, Maya, and my aunt Tina from California. My sister and I were playing in the river by our cabin and I saw the mud moving. I started digging. I saw something and I thought it was a flat rock. So I started to lift it up. It started to wiggle which made some mud fall on it. I lifted it up slowly and I saw a little head!!! I yelled DADDY I FOUND A SOFT SHELLED TURTLE!!! but nobody came, so I decided to just catch minnows. So I put it on a rock. When I came back it was gone!!! Read my book to find out what happened next!

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  19. My seed idea was when I broke my arm. I was having a candy stand in my front yard. My dad was inside getting more candy and juice. My mom my sister and I where listening to music in the front yard when I did a Cartweel down hill. Somehow I twisted my arm in a circle. I had BROKE it. and thats my seed idea

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  21. My seed idea is when I went fishing with my dad. I got a giant fish. I almost got pulled in. I Caught the fish and I got it in the boat. My dad was celebrating me.

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