Wednesday, January 20, 2016


Writers,we have all been working on plotting out our stories on story mountains. As we know, the event at the top of the mountain is when the problem is at its worst or most challenging point. Please share your mountain tops with us! What is the most intense part of your story...the problem at its worst! Write four to five sentences using the correct grammar and punctuation.

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  1. The top of my mountain is when Lucy's mom dies and Lucy and her father have to move away. It is kind of like the book we read in class yesterday about the bird. Because the girl's mom dies and they have to move away.

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    1. I think I'm going to like the book you write because I like the book you got the idea from.

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  2. I am doing a book about this really good skier his name is Joseph. One day he went down a black diamond really fast and he hit a small rock and that caused him to head toured a ramp. But before he could stop he he flew over the giant wall of trees.when he landed he could not stop that part of the mountain was to steep. Then bang he hit a rock right leg first his leg was weak he could not even move or slide down because when crashed he slid on to a very long flat part. He also could not call for help because when he hit the rock he slid on to a very long flat part. Would Joseph get help or will he die of hunger or hyperthermia.

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    1. Interesting. Very interesting.

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    2. That sounds like a very sad and interesting book. I wonder where you got the idea?

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    3. That has to be a page turner

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  3. The top of the mountain in the book Sassy is when everyone in her family calls her Little sister,but she really really hates that name. So she tried to find a solution to stop her family from calling her LittleSister.One of her solution was when any of them called her by the name LittleSister she wouldn't answer until they called her Sassy.

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  4. I'm doing a book where a girl named Georgia loves riding horses and she is asked to be in a horse show. Georgia is so excited she starts practicing every single day and then one day she falls off her horse and breaks her wrist. She has to stay at home and she can visit the horses and she finally realizes that you don't use your wrist when you ride you use your arm. So she got back on the horse and was in the show. I thought of this book because I love horses and I fell off my horse and I really hurt my wrist but thankfully I didn't break it.

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    1. What a great way to think and your book sounds so interesting. I really want to read it.

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  5. I am making a book called Cookie Town. Joe and Steve want to make chocolate chip cookies. They get out all the ingredients to make the cookies then they realize that they didn't have enough chocolate chips to make the cookies. (This is the top of my mountain.) "Oh no!" exclaimed Steve. They walked to the store and bought a bag of chocolate chips. They went back home and baked all the cookies. THE END

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  6. I,m writing a book about a boy named Jake. He gets invited do a laser tag party. Jake lies about being good at it at school but actually he doesn't know how to play. When Jake gets there his friends realize he lied. Thats the top of my story mountain

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  7. I am making a book called Mystic. It's about a girl named Avery and is really excited to go to her camp, Camp Mystic! But she is also really nervous because it's her first time. When she gets there, there is a mean girl in her cabin. Avery is a different tribe, the Tonkwas and Avery is the Kiowas, so when the parents come Avery has to compete against her! Luckily Avery's tribe wins and at the end the girl is nice to Avery

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    1. Sounds like a book I would want to read!

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  8. The top of my mountain is when this boy named Thomas Cena and he gets attacked by a bear and he dodges all the attacks from the bear. But suddenly he gets hit by the bears claw, soon the bear gives up and leaves. The poor boy has to drag him self down the cliff but soon enough he finds smoke from a cabin. He finally finds his family and he is taken to a hospital!

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  9. The top of my mountain is when a girl named Melody has a chance to shoot the championship goal. But then she gets worried that she won't make the shot. Then she makes it and wins the championship game. She then receives the MVP award for her team.

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  10. I am making a book about a girl named AJ and she wants to be on a gymnastics team . She tries to get on the first time but she dose not get on the team.On the second time she is a back up for the team.On the 3rd time she gets on the team but when she was practicing at her house she sprang her ankle and could not to gymnastics for 6 weeks but then they said that they could shorten it to 3 weeks so she would be able to go to her first meat

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  11. At the top of my mountain there is a teenage girl who wants to become a famous fashion designer but is still too poor and nobody realizes her. She gets worried and feels like giving up but then she understands that there is no point in giving up and that she must keep trying. Later in life, she creates a clothing line that is a smashing success. Everyone in the world wants her pieces and she is no longer poor like she was when she was young.

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  12. My character is named Gracie. She has been in lots of plays and her school is putting on one. Gracie thinks she will get the lead. At the top of my mountain she got ensemble and her sister gets the lead. Will she quite the play or will she end up having a lot of fun?

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  13. I am making a book about a kid named jack. That gets a autograph ball from Tom Brady. At the top of my mountain is somebody stealing Jack's ball. At the left side it is Jack looking for the person who stop the ball. but it will be worth It and whoever stole that ball is going to jail.

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  14. I am making a book titled Cooper and the Nerf Fight. The main character is Cooper. Cooper is turning 10 years old and is inviting all his friends to his birthday. Norway, Cooper's enemy, comes to Cooper's birthday party and gets hurt. Cooper helps him up.

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  15. I am making a book about a boy named Aaron and it is his 1st time skiing, where he goes with his mom and 2 sisters. Aaron is going on the ski lift with his mom and 2 sisters and his teacher Gonzo. Aaron started skiing and it was really fun until they were all the way down the mountain but his mom kept on falling like a cow. When they were half way down Aaron was all alone and he went in circles 15 times waiting for Gonzo. But Aaron's mom was tumbling down the mountain with Aaron's 2 sisters. They eventually met up at the bottom of the mountain and had a good lunch.

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  16. My character's name is Ellie and the book's name is Because Of Ellie.
    Ellie is a kind person because she finds a dog on the street and kept it and she named it Buddy. My first event is Ellie is new to town, she moved to Houston, Texas and does not have any friends. Her dad had pass away. My second event is she meets someone and they become friends ( By the way her friend's name is Emma. ) and she meets a bully ( and by the way the bully's name is Abigail. ) My big event is Abigail starts to bully Ellie. My solution is Emma stands up for her and Buddy comforts her. At the end Abigail wants to become friends with Ellie and Emma because Abigail felt left out. So Ellie said yes. The End!

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  17. My characters name is Bob his son is Jacob they where one camping trip. Bob and Jacob it is the night and it is cold to.The mountain is mont chilly and they where almost up but they hit a ROCK!!!!!! and tript and they brock a leg and a hand no cellphone serves. So they code barley move and in a cold and 12:00 in the night. and a car came bye but they dint see and then a bother car came back and they sall them and they went in the car and went to the hospital and Bob brock his leg and Jacob the doctor said it was a mager brake. And Bob his is a miner brake 2 montes later they get to take it off!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

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  18. My characters name is Griffin and the book's name Airsoft Ace. Griffin is nice because he invited to his team new people who joined the airsoft camp. Griffin is bullied by a boy named Jason. Griffin and Jason get into a fight and Griffin loses. Then Griffin wants to get Jason back. Then he heard that Jason was joining the airsoft camp he thought it was a great opportunity to get back at Jason. They played and Griffin eliminated 15 people. When the match was over Jason shoved Griffin on the ground in front of Griffin's team. Griffin and his
    team stood up to Jason. After that Jason never bullied Griffin again.

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